Updated Version Of Double Page Spread 6/12/12

This is another updated version of my double page spread. I haven't made too many changes this time around, yet I have made extremely significant ones. Firstly, my image has been changed to a more realistic and relatable one. Prior to this updated version, I included an image of a woman who was holding a child (This has some relation to the context of the double page), yet after receiving more feedback from my classmates, I realised that an image of a live concert I was at, helps make the double page more effective. The research of magazines further helped me realise that I needed to add a caption to the image, which is a change I had made. Although it doesn't really stand out and isn't necessarily the focus point of the double page spread, it is still effective because it adds to the realism of the double page. Furthermore, I added page numbers to the double page. This again was to make the double page spread more reliable. The changes I have made to my double page spread are mainly relatable to realism and this is what I think my classmates were trying to tell me. I think although I added a good font type with good conventions,I needed to add more realistic items that would make it look more appealing to the audience. At first I didn't really want to change my double page spread, but the feedback I received made me realise that this is the best thing to happen as it is looks more appealing and realistic.