Updated Double Page Version 14/03/13

This is my most updated Double Page Spread (14/03/13).  After receiving further relevant feedback, it was clear that I needed to have one side of my double page for the main image, and the other for text and information that makes the story realistic. I think that the feedback for this, has made me realise that having a main image taking up one side of the double page, then it would be more appealing to the audience. Especially given the fact that the person I am using is apparently a famous person, the audience would respond quickly to the main image and be intrigued to read what the other page has to say.

I have changed the colour and text completely. I think that my previous version shows clear signs of dullness and that it doesn't have much appeal to it at all. Having a contrasting colour on the right page makes it more interesting, appealing and intriguing for the audience then my previous version. I am happy with the story I cam up with and want to keep this throughout my updates. I feel it is original and different to most stories and so could give me an advantage.

The main image I will use will hopefully make the double page spread come together. I am currently thinking about applying a white background with the singer either posing or singing in action. White would be the colour I want to use because I think, Red, Blue and White are all very different colours and so therefore would make it a very appealing double page spread.